shorcanado: (π„ž his lover was swept away)

Re: MOONJELLY

[personal profile] shorcanado 2024-08-27 01:52 am (UTC)(link)
Mm. It was good. Thank you. I'm...glad you still follow me.

I read your latest book, too.
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Re: MOONJELLY

[personal profile] shorcanado 2024-08-27 06:08 am (UTC)(link)
...Dense. You write too many words to say what you're trying to say. And, as I've said before, it's dry. It lacks any aspect of your personality in it. I know you hate telling stories, but your writing should still be yours anyway. I guess you could say that's what the density of your work is, but...it feels like the sort of thing that would be more effective if you did write fiction. And...who says that research can't tell a story, anyway? Plenty of studies do that - I've read plenty about things related to my work, and the words still guide me through an arc, of sorts. I think you can do better. You do when you're just talking rather than writing, anyway.







I liked it.
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Re: MOONJELLY

[personal profile] shorcanado 2024-08-27 06:59 am (UTC)(link)
...You...

[






]

...cccccould...

[ it trails off in a way that sounds like, a little questioning, but is mostly just musing. like yeah, that could happen, ]
shorcanado: (π„ž forget to say goodbyes)

Re: MOONJELLY

[personal profile] shorcanado 2024-08-27 04:34 pm (UTC)(link)
You're better at it than me.

[ on account of like, she talks and know how words and tone work. very low bar here. ]

...What do you want to say?
shorcanado: (π„ž you see that I'm ready)

Re: MOONJELLY

[personal profile] shorcanado 2024-08-27 05:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh. I guess...

[ makes like

a short attempt to reach for corretto. pauses. eventually settles on like

kind of awkwardly petting her hair. ]

I did, too.
shorcanado: (π„ž has been lit for so long)

Re: MOONJELLY

[personal profile] shorcanado 2024-08-27 06:06 pm (UTC)(link)
[ bonk...

to her credit she just stays there. still petting corretto. nuzzles foreheads, a tiny bit. ]

I'm not...going to live with you again, when this trip ends. But I wouldn't hate it if we spent time together until then. It's...better than everyone else. And better than...

[ deep breath. ]

...being lonely.
shorcanado: (π„ž and it's my throne)

Re: MOONJELLY

[personal profile] shorcanado 2024-08-27 09:38 pm (UTC)(link)
[ -oh.

somehow she forgot what corretto just said, so she's taken a little bit by surprise by that. once she catches up though, she's kissing back eagerly just the way she used to - with a bit of teeth and clingy desperation. ]
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Re: MOONJELLY

[personal profile] shorcanado 2024-08-29 04:19 am (UTC)(link)
[ as she's pulled in, she puts a hand on corretto's hip and starts to wheel the both of them around so she can push the other woman flush against the wall of the hallway, breaking the kiss to murmur, in a dazed sort of voice: ]

You...smell really good.

I'm hungry.
shorcanado: (π„ž he was torn)

Re: MOONJELLY

[personal profile] shorcanado 2024-08-29 08:20 am (UTC)(link)
Mm.

[ and she doesn't say anything further - instead she uses her free hand to tilt corretto's head upward, before lunging in to bite, firmly and deeply. ]
shorcanado: (π„ž 'cause I believe in us)

Re: MOONJELLY

[personal profile] shorcanado 2024-08-29 09:12 pm (UTC)(link)
[ she gnaws, a couple times, before pulling away and leaving a kiss. then, breathed out against corretto's throat, a shy murmur: ]

Tastes as good as always...

[ and then a moment where she sniffs a little - it's not clear if she's like. sniffling or just smelling corretto, though. ]

How long has it been for you?

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